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Loreley by Aurelia-Isabella Loreley by Aurelia-Isabella
Photo, Retouch and Outfit by Lacrima Serenitatis (non dA)

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I think this photo should have been named Fallen Angel, anyways let’s start the critique.

Over all crop is really nice, I feel that the wave on the top right corner is a nice addition to the story I’m reading from the shot, a wave breaks from the ocean to earth, and the wings behind the model seem to be hers and it seems that she has fallen from heaven to earth, losing her wings and surely much more. The atmosphere is gloomy, and even though, I would have appreciated something punchier in the colors, it does suit the mood of the shot.

The eyes and the hand stroking the feather give out a feeling of loss hopelessness.

On the technical side, the lighting is great; too bad there is a very tiny shadow under the nose.
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Perfect model for this image!
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Aurelia-Isabella Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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VictorianRedRose Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That's so gorgeous :D And aaahh, that corset :heart:
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Aurelia-Isabella Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much :heart:
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VictorianRedRose Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very welcome :D
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Very pretty and original, we almost want to take in our arms to help him takeoff
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Aurelia-Isabella Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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Aurelia-Isabella Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot :heart:
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